I have to keep reminding myself to keep it simple!! What's the deal! Ok already! How many times do I have to repeat it. So back to value thumbnails to make things clear again. I am going to do my best to "say the rest" with color changes in the large value shapes and not more value changes. Here's a start. We will see what happens. I always try to finish a work from 10 to 20ft back. I go for that "immediate read".